D#5, HW#3, Peer Review Reflection

While reviewing and editing my peer's draft's I was able to see things in my own draft that needed to be changed and fixed. I also like to read what other people are writing about and see how they are applying the things that they have learned. I realized that in my own draft I repeat myself more than I should, and that I skipped some points that I should have addressed. Such as my future plans with this issue. From my classmates comments I saw that I need to be more specific and give more detail about what I'm stating. Camille and Stephann reviewed my proposal. I reviewed Mike Whipple.